Thoughts
are
personal
meant
for
only
the youthful
feelings
in
you.
Eyes of you are God’s fantastic creation
Left with no option, n accept invitation
Strands of your long hair
Fragrance makes me dare
Your assets n fun make me full
Breath have my thoughts dull
Your blush is ravishing
Smile in you thrashing
Lips so cute, fine shapes so fine
You involve me in naughty design
You are a world of fantasy
Your thoughts stir to ecstasy
You are always difficult to resist
Force always to submit to insist
Silky n milky around so perfect
Surfing you a feathery aspect
Valley n depth in eyes people call
Mystifying world, perfect for stall
Finger tips strolling, a magic of heaven
Hypnotized left, spared moment no one
I can no longer wait
B’cause I am on date
Dr.Mahesh Chandra Panda said,
August 15, 2010 @ 1:19 am
Your expression of love in your poem recalls my expression of love in my poem ‘Manasi’written in my youth.
Dr. Madan Goyal said,
August 15, 2010 @ 1:35 am
Please reproduce it.
Every body should remain young till his rebirth as a new kid.
Why grow old? Why not leave this world as young?
Dr.Mahesh Chandra Panda said,
August 15, 2010 @ 3:48 am
The poem ‘Manasi’ was written in Oriya.
It means a ‘Dream Girl’.
Flooded with beauties,
She created a sea of love in my mind and heart.
Dr Madan Goyal said,
August 15, 2010 @ 3:52 am
Thanks for sharing your young heart.
I personally prefer to remain young.
I don’t want to grow.
I want to slip in to next generation without being old ever.
Dr. Prahallad Panda said,
August 15, 2010 @ 4:06 am
Very nice. Have you changed the template!
Dr Madan Goyal said,
August 15, 2010 @ 4:21 am
Yes Sir,
I have not only changed the template but changed the heart too.
It was the easiest transplant.
Lot of pleasure outside surgery.
Visit other latest artcles too if you liked them.
Arts too has something to do with it.
Kavita said,
August 16, 2010 @ 9:59 pm
It’s a beautifully written poem, doctor..
Fantasies are a lovely part of human existence… and should never really be suppressed!
I enjoyed reading this expression …
Dr. Madan Goyal said,
August 16, 2010 @ 11:41 pm
Thanks for the read.
I am overjoyed that my toddling was appreciated as a step.
I have deleted my rest of the reply and have put it under
Hope you had more pecks
Wishing you bountiful