Eyes

Eyes are window of our soul

Agreed but, where is the soul

          Eyes are part of expression on face

          But for the actors’ depiction on face

Eyes are ocean, once submersed

Unlikely come out non- impressed

            Eyes are deceitful, can be cheated

            Beware of the bait, so well created

Eyes are your unwritten invitation

Think carefully before submission

           Eyes can be naughty, enjoy in them

           We reciprocate, is national anthem

Eyes can meet, exchange information

Speed is volcanic, rapid transmission

           Eyes read and convey at same sparker

           Nothing is left for the shrewd master

Eyes can be dull, sleepy and mystifying

Shining bright, & perfectly mesmerizing

        Eyes are innocent, care them nicely

        You have a duty to preserve pricey

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  1. 1

    Trataka;one of the six shatkarmas, or cleansing techniques in Yoga practices relieves eye ailments such as eye-strain and headache,myopia,astigmatism and even early stages of cataract.

  2. 3

    Shawn Bird said,

    I particularly like this line:
    Eyes can be dull, sleepy and mystifying

    Shining bright, & perfectly mesmerizing

    I’m afraid I don’t understand what is meant in the final couplet, however, about them being pricey. Unless we’re talking cosmetic surgery, the stunny beauty of an eye is free!

    Thanks for sharing.
    Shawn of the Rally

    • 4

      Pricey word here is used for priceless or of supreme nature.
      Innocent people and innocent girls should not be exploited, cheated or harmed.
      Thanks for reading and hope you liked it.
      God bless you the company of nice eyes.

  3. 5

    2zpoint said,

    Many great thoughts in this about eyes…they do give reason to ponder. I like how you crafted this poem doc. Each phase told so much. Brilliant piece…Smile it doesn’t cost a thing!

    • 6

      Smile doesn’t cost a thing
      Only mood need few wings
      You have given me prompt for next poem.
      Soon I shall jot down & post.

      Thanks, It is really lovely to read you.
      Have a nice 2..z. and a point.

  4. 7

    Wysteria said,

    Great thoughts and writing. Gives me another perspective to think about

    Wysteria

  5. 9

    Jingle said,

    lovely way to see eyes and how they work wonders.

  6. 10

    Jingle said,

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/

    Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, hope to see you in of week 7, our theme is love and romance. Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx


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