Wake Up

What is in reality a world?

It is not what we see in kind

But what we see in our mind

It is not what we see as the dirt

But it is perception of our heart

It is not what lies on earth as theirs

It is  infact what our brain stares

It is not about what whales eat

It is what our brain takes as treat

Stars may be shining in the sky

Your world is feeling felt as thy

Living in past is a useless worry

One can’t change it, make no try

Responsibility one takes, be met

However one may have to sweat

People have to live in their world

Join these all to get a grand guild

Life is for enjoying, live it happily

Don’t trouble others, do it steadily

There is a lot in world what is beautiful

One needs to think and live bountiful

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40 Responses so far »

  1. 1

    Put yourself into a state of being that is favourable to achieving success,joy and fulfillment.

  2. 3

    Jingle said,

    true,
    what we see in mind,
    not what we see in kind.

    beautiful poem
    Thanks for sharing.

  3. 6

    This is truly amazing.. loved it..

    –Someone Is Special–

  4. 8

    Lisa said,

    Very beautiful wording and flow.

  5. 11

    boababpapers said,

    truths speak for themselves…

  6. 13

    Jingle said,

    Happy Rally,

    beside visiting participants, you may wish to support by visiting or commenting for half a dozen fresh poets to explore.

    Thanks for the cute entry.
    Enjoyed your work very much.

  7. 15

    Jessicas Japes said,

    There’s a lot of common sense talking here,and cleverly put across as poetry!
    I enjoyed the read and the sentiment.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/10/29/i-want-chocolate/

  8. 17

    Love this! So much truth in this poem…well done!

  9. 19

    Lovely Annie said,

    Wow! I needed to read this poem today…synchronicity…or coincidence….
    but this piece touches my thoughts right now…and now I remember…the only thing happening right now is in this very moment!

    Thank you! and have a superb Rally!

  10. 21

    There’s a lot of truth in your words. They’re not only poetry; they’re words of wisdom. One’s world is, indeed, how one sees it. One’s world is what his reality is; it is “But what we see in our mind.” Thanks for sharing and also for the compliment about my poem. 🙂

  11. 23

    Shashi said,

    Very sweet and rhythmic poem.. I liked it so much. Thanks for sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  12. 25

    ashbeezone said,

    Nice thought Doc …
    Nice flow of words .. Amazing !!

    Heyy Take a look at my new Poetry ..
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/examination/
    Selected for Jingle Poetry Week 32

    and other creations as well in my BLOG
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    Hope you like them for sure !!

  13. 27

    2zpoint said,

    Perception of the mind seems to always rule our worlds … in some cases it can imprison our spirit…others free it but isn’t something that is always subject to interpretation and based on others perception? LOL!
    Great inspiration and food for thought Doc…I always like reading your words!
    May you have peace and time to smile.

  14. 29

    what we see in mind, isn’t it at most times, reflective of what we see in kind? i mean, doesn’t mind relate to what it views in daily life?

    My Rally Post

    • 30

      Aim of this poem is to point out that unnecessary worries are pointless, but these occupy mind of many people most of the times.

      What actually matters is what we feel in our mind, because that is our perception of the world. It may not be synonymous with reality always.

      Thanks for the visit and raising the querry.

      Have a nice day.

  15. 31

    Sumit Sarkar said,

    As always….fantastic…
    🙂

  16. 32

    great piece. loved the staccato feel to it. very positive and uplifting.

  17. 34

    Jingle said,

    how are you?
    reminding you silly and the same stuff;
    return favors,
    do 18 NEW….
    let me know after you are done.

  18. 35

    uma.a said,

    Life is for enjoying, live it happily – Don’t trouble others, do it steadily

    There is a lot in world what is beautiful -One needs to think and live bountiful

    Wondeful words..beautifully conveyed 🙂

  19. 36

    RASHMI said,

    Beautiful poem …
    Very positive and the flow is amazing..
    Enjoyed very much.

  20. 38

    Jamie Dedes said,

    No truer words have been poemed. Wonderful. Thank you.

  21. 39

    I mistyped this website and luckily I found it again. presently am at my university I added this to favorites so that I can re-read it later regards


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